You added color.
The difference between this and the "teaser" is color and an extra scene. THAT IS IT.
You should have atleast added more. A lot more.
A full episode shouldn't be the exact same as the teaser for it.
Anyway, just be sure not to submit a 'teaser' for the next installment before submitting the full thing.
The difference is color, splicing scenes, cleaning up the animation, adding sounds, cahnging music, moving things around, re-animate other parts, splice out the dialogue, added 3d....I'm glad I submitted a teaser because From the comments I got I made it better than what the teaser was.
It's ANOTHER collab!
Just because it is a collab doesn't mean everybody has to vote 5.
To tell you the truth, about 90% of this was utter shit that should be BLAMMED!
The other 10% was DECENT at most. Nothing spectacular. No real POINT.
Also, in 24 hours I would atleast expect something that doesn't look like it took 10 mins. to make.
I'm voting 0, because it's already overrated enough as it is.
If you didn't enjoy it at all, then you voted fair. Sorry to dissappoint you, DrDeath. We'll try harder next time =\ =/
Why the 3.90 rating?
The graphics aren't entirely bad, but all this was was pictures tweened. Sorry, but there is no reason for this kind of rating. It is very short, and boring. Why submit each small little scene when made, instead of submitting the whole movie at once?
Re-creating something already done in Kill Bill is stupid to. Be original.
This my friend, is overrated.
Because unfortunatly, I have limited time with moving to a new house, starting a new college course, sorting a new job, and countless other tasks.
I would rather post it now in bits rather than wait for the year it's going to take me to finish it.
Call it impatient if you will, I call it sensible.
It's not going to be to everyones tastes, like all animations, so call it overrated if you will. Majority rules.
(Sorry if that sounds harsh, but I don't like reviews that contain little constructive critism, and serve mostly to try to tarnish the animation for whatever reason.)
Wow.
That was really bad. Ok, time to point out the obvious. You stole the idea from Synj vs. Horrid. I mean, c'mon don't deny it. Big black monster. Thing with claws climbs it an junk.
The graphics were really bad. The animation was......bad. Limbless characters? There was not a single thing about Star Wars in the movie other than the music and the flashing things that looked like lightsabers.
PLEASE, be original. Work a lil more in flash and you will get it.
PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF YOUR FAMILY GO SHOOT YOURSELF
Well...
...I don't see why people love this so much. The graphics are really bad. There is no excuse for this. Even if you suck at drawing/don't have a tablet, you can still try very hard to make them atleast LOOK like you put effort into them.
...Also, you didn't stream OR stop the music at the end. This is a short flash with some thought to it, but it is still crap. Also, PLEASE get better at FLASH. There are soo many things wrong with it....As an animator myself, I can see how you made it and what could be better.
I really think Newgrounds is turning into a big pile of overrated crap.
Not everyone is at the same calibur that you are, you know this right? If people could start anything and produce amazing results, we wouldnt need schools or training for anything. But we can't do that. People use experience to learn from mistakes, rather than getting it right the first time. there's a saying out there, somewhere that says "who's greater, the person who makes no mistakes or the person who makes mistakes but learns from them?" You may be a better flash artist than me, but you also have loads more experience under your belt, as opposed to me, who did this movie with nothing but a haphazard idea. so before you flame me for being bad at this, look at yourself and how your comparing me to you. (b^_')b
With each flash, I hate you even more...
Ok, first you re-used graphics....
2nd : Learn how to SPELL.
3rd: STOLE FUCKING IDEAS FROM THE GREATEST COMIC SERIES IN EXISTANCE!
4th: Very overrated.
5th: Stop living. Just...well...die!
wtf, i got the idea from sin city, memento, and myself, dont try to put tiles on me you cunt
The ending made it all make so much sense.
The ending is what made it for me.
Alright animation,
from the beginning on it felt like a cheesy "omg suicide! NOEZ!"
But the ending is what made this an original piece of work.
...oh, and a tip: PLEASE DON'T TRACE. The hands at the beginning were obviously traced..
It's called rotoscoping, and it was part of my project guidelines. Opinions and commands are two different things.
No offense....
...but your flashes are starting to get worse and worse.
Wasn't too great. Cheesy at times.
Also, the ending was too cliche.
I made this flash quite awhile ago honestly, it has been sitting around collecting dust. I was just waiting on getting the audio done and whatnot so that is why it's a bit lower quality than TR 8.
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