hmmm...
I saw this one and the other that you submitted yesterday, and all I can say is, Just because you smack somebody or stab them or whatever doesn't make it own4ge or own3d.
Own3d is an internet slang for severely owning them (Raping them in a game, 0-50 or making a very good comeback that they can't say anything to).
Anywho, you have the graphics down pretty good, but it seemed to move too slowly and the ways you "OWN3D' them were pretty lame.
Just think of some twisted, sick ways to severely PWN somebody and you'll have it down. Think as if you were doing something as bad as raping them! (in a video game, that is...)
More thought into the violence! ^_^